Read it-the best, and most intriguing and engaging, part of the story is when the kid knocks himself out on the jungle gym. It actually brought back memories as I have knocked my head, I think it was my front teeth, on the jungle gym and it freakin' hurt. I survived though.Too bad flash fiction doesn't give you too much room to be descriptive.-Brandon Rhys Parker
No, it doesn't, but the thing I really love about flash is that it teaches you to be really tight with your prose. Hell, it doesn't really teach so much as force it.
I got that vibe while reading it. There was this tension throughout that you wee itching to go more in depth, but the space constraints were preventing you from doing so.-Brandon Rhys Parker
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